2008年6月25日水曜日

Self introduction

I want to my self introduction. I like to play volleyball. It is very fun, and I enjoy with my friends. Also I like to listen music. I like hip hop, and classic and so on. My favorite musician is fergie, she is very cute and sexy and she is good at singing a song. I want to like her. I have 5 family, my father and my mother and my younger brother and my older brother. My father is very strict and my mother is very kind. She is good at cooking. I like to eat her dishes. My younger brother is good at to playing the piano. He is very good pianist.
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Portfolio for Writing III,

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Student ID: vwxyz
(last five digits of
your student no.)

Portfolio for Writing III,
Section 1a [or] 1c

(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More


[embed your proto-portfolios here]

(See: Note 2, below.)

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below[.])

1.1. Showcase
Short
titles
[+ links]
Dates
(yyyy.mm.dd)

W
C
L
P
M
Self-introduction
08.04.20
(250 words)


2008.04.09
7
270
0
0
0
0
Movie review
08.05.04
(300 words)

Shrek

2008.05.07
4
193
0
0
0
0
University life
08.05.18

I like my life

2008.05.20
3
392
3
0
0
0
Another review
08.06.01

Do you want to Diet?

http://diet.goo.ne.jp/member/howto/
http://sauna-suit.odsk.net/atom.xml

2008.05.28
5
431
2
3
5
0
Language learning
history
08.06.15

Language is my friend.

2008.06.11
5
465
0
0
0
0
5th essay
(pending)
TBA

Self introduction

2008.0618


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0
0
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Totals---
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Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media embedded

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
  • [Remove these square brackets, including these remarks; identify your best essay, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

2.0. Comments

Showcase
Titles of posts with links
Dates of comments (yyyy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
I like my life
2008.05.21

15
good
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*Do you want to diet?
2008.06.04
16
make me happy
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*
I like my life
2008.05.21
30
good
2.4. Most comments on:
Titles of posts with link
Dates of posts (yyyy.mm.dd) Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments*[*]
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*




2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
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2.4.2. Any of your other posts*




2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?---
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?
  • ...

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

  • [Remove these square brackets, including these remarks; write out your reflections on giving and receiving comments here.]


3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. ShowcaseShort titles
with links
Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)WordsComments
Example:
Vampire Killer
07.05.16
39
1
1-01

BR 1-01: The missing coins

08.04.22
158
0
1-02

BR 1-02: Surfer!

08.04.25
263
0
1-03

BR 1-03: Rescue!

08.05.02
559
0
1-04

BR 1-04: A Girl Named Helen Keller

08.05.12
545
0
1-05

BR 1-05: Jojo makes the TEAM

08.05.16
202
0
1-06

BR 1-06: Mike's Lucky Day

08.06.02
301
0
1-07

BR 1-07: Newspaper Chase

08.06.18
294
0
1-08

BR 1-08:Carnival

08.06.24
292
0
1-09
BR 1-09: Gram's monstar

08.07.10

103

0
1-10
BR 1-10: Don't Throw It Away
08.07.13
99

0
1-11
BR 1-11: Young Cam Jansen
08.07.13

62

0
1-12

BR 1-12: ALADDIN & HIS MAGICAL LAMP

08.07.13
70
0








































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TOTALS:


Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
  • [Remove these square brackets, including these remarks; identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media


Showcase
Yes
No
4.1. Does your blog have an archive?


4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?


4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):---
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  • "books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)

  • "essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")

  • "quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)

  • "links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)

  • "movies" (plural) AND "photos" (plural)

4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?
  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?
    • ___ other labels attached to three or more posts
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  • Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below.
    • www (n)
    • xxx (m)
    • yyy (o)
    • zzz (p)
    • ...
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4.3. Links & media---
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4.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics?
  • Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?

  • How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics?
    • ___ posts including pictures or other graphics
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4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?
  • How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?*
    • ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)
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4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?
  • How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?
    • ___ posts including other media
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  • What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here:
    1. ...
    2. ...
    3. ...

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4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.
  1. ... I made funny title.
  2. ... I tried to put few pictures on.
  3. ... I made music reviews

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

  • ...

6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

  • ...

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Notes:
  1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08).
  2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios in the footer of your blog.
  3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008)
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BIG PARFAIT

BIG PARFAIT

She went to shopping mall clair. She ate big parfait with her friends. This big parfait was sooo big.

Why I choose this post, because I like sweets, too. Also I want to eat this big parfait by my self.
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2008年6月24日火曜日

My favorite movie or movies

I have a lot of favorite movies. One of my favorite movies is "Pretty Woman". It is nice movie, this actress is Julia Roberts who has good smile, and she became rich when she met a man. I like cindellera story. Also I like to watch Animation. I like Disney series. For example, Liro and Stich Lion King and Beauty and Beast and so on. There animations are very beautiful, and very fun. I am not boring when I am watching theirs.
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Foreign countries

I like foreign countries; because I entered to this college I met great exchange students. They are very kind, and talk to me many things about own country. I want to go abroad. I have never been to abroad. I had no chance, and I get away my chance. But in this summer I go to America, Minnesota. I am waiting for go Minnesota. Also I want to go Europe, Britain. The reasons are there are many traditional architectures and music. I want to go British if I could go anywhere.
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How I study English

I will talke you how I study English. First I remember English words, because if I read a book I don't understand words I can't read the book. So I think it's important to remember English words. Second I talke with exchange student. I don't speak well, but it's important to talke exchange student. I believe that try more and more I can speak well. So, let's study English.
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My other classes

I like speaking class. This class teacher is Mrs. Judy. She is funny and her class is interesting. This class has review and preparation. This homework uses in the class. She teaches us how to speak English in uses English countries. I like to learn this. Also I like prepare for going abroad class. I will go abroad in this summer, This class has many actives, for example, introduction ourselves and researching American something and Japanese something. I search American clothing and American fashion.
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