There are many animals on the farm. Chickens, little chicks, turkeys, pigs and pink piglets, cows, dogs and puppies, sheep and lambs, goats and kid, ducks and ducklings, geese, horses and foal, ponies, cats and so on. then which animals do you like the best? However I could not choose anymore. I like every animals:)
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2009年1月24日土曜日
2009年1月7日水曜日
Student ID: 07138
Portfolio for Writing IV, Section 1c (See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.) [Please embed your proto-portfolios here; then remove this line of remarks, including the square brackets.]
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below.) Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
1.1. Showcase
Short titles with links
Dates yy.mm.dd
¶
W
C
L
P
M
Website review 08.09.29 (375+ words)
Animals
o8.09.24
3
391
4
0
0
0
Favorite place(-s) 08.10.20 (450+ words)
My favorite place
08.10.15
5
481
2
0
0
0
Mrs. Doubtfire 08.11.04 (500+ words)
Mrs. Doubtfire bonds and family
08.11.04
5
531
2
0
0
0
Community life 08.11.17 (default length*)
Community Youth hostel club
08.11.13
2
311
0
0
0
0
Kumamoto's best-kept secrets 08.12.01 (5+ ¶¶)
Secret of Kumamoto Precious place
08.12.03
3
150
0
0
0
0
Learning with computers 2008.12.15 (6+ ¶¶)
Learning with computer
08.12.10
1
46
0
0
0
0
Totals
---
---
19
1910
8
0
0
0
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics M: number of other media included in post *: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
I think my best essay is Mrs. Doubtfire bonds and family, because I got five paragraphs and I was impressed this movie. I thought that family was boned tightly.
2.0. Comments
Showcase
Titles of posts with links
Dates of comments yy.mm.dd
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*
2.4. Most comments on:
Titles of posts with link
Dates of posts yy.mm.dd
Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
---
---
---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
---
---
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
---
---
---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?
---
---
---------- * Current semester comments on essays and other posts ** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.
... It is in a sidebar and footer widget, because it is easy to see the comments.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
.... maybe nothing
3.0. Book Reviews
3.1. Showcase
Short titles with links
Dates (yy.mm.dd)
Words
Comments
Example:
Vampire Killer
07.05.16
39
1
2-01
BONES
08.08.25
256
0
2-02
Hamster Chase
08.08.28
248
0
2-03
THERE BY THE SEA
08.08.29
104
0
2-04
AMANDA PIG ON HER OWN WIHOUT OLIVER
08.09.01
196
0
2-05
AMANDA PIG ON HER OWN SICK IN BED
08.09.05
96
0
2-06
THE BIG MESS
08.09.07
200
0
2-07
THE BAD SAD MAD DAY
08.09.08
289
0
2-08
The ENORMOUS TURNIP
08.09.10
300
0
2-09
The Castel That Jack Built
08.10.16
110
0
2-10
Goldilocks and the Three Bears
08.10.23
363
0
2-11
The Gingerbread Man
08.10.28
246
0
2-12
TOAD EATS OUT
08.11.08
155
0
2-13
My Tooth Is Loose!
08.11.10
230
0
2-14
THE UGRY DUCKLING
08.11.20
282
0
2-15
Little Witch Goes to School
08.12.01
421
0
2-16
The Giant Jelly Bean Jar
08.12.13
267
0
2-17
The Garden That We Grew
08.12.20
65
0
2-18
Farm Animals
09.01.24
55
0
---
---
Totals:
3883
0
Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
Showcase
Yes
No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?
○
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?
○
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?
○
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?
○
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?
○
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):
---
---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)
○
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")
○
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)
○
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)
○
"movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)
○
"brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")
○
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?
○
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?
___ other labels attached to three or more posts
---
---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below.
www (n)
xxx (m)
yyy (o)
zzz (p)
...
---
---
4.3. Links & media
---
---
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?
○
Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?
○
How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics?
___ posts including photos or other graphics
---
---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?
○
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?
___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)
---
---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?
○
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?
___ posts including other media
---
---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here:
...
...
...
---
---
What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yy.mm.dd) for reference.
... (short link, date)
... (short link, date)
... (short link, date)
---
---
4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.
...I made a brainstorming label, because it is useful to research what I write.
...
...
5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing on it
Please feel free to include reflections on both spring and fall semester work, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).
...
...
...
6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors
...To successors, you might write blog as soon as you can or after you have to write blog in haste.
...I should have done this blog as soon as I could.
...I should have put many links.
____________________ Notes:
This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c (Fall, 2008).
Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
____________________ License:
This portfolio template is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog" (without quotation marks).
Portfolio for Writing IV, Section 1c (See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.) [Please embed your proto-portfolios here; then remove this line of remarks, including the square brackets.]
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below.) Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
1.1. Showcase
Short titles with links
Dates yy.mm.dd
¶
W
C
L
P
M
Website review 08.09.29 (375+ words)
Animals
o8.09.24
3
391
4
0
0
0
Favorite place(-s) 08.10.20 (450+ words)
My favorite place
08.10.15
5
481
2
0
0
0
Mrs. Doubtfire 08.11.04 (500+ words)
Mrs. Doubtfire bonds and family
08.11.04
5
531
2
0
0
0
Community life 08.11.17 (default length*)
Community Youth hostel club
08.11.13
2
311
0
0
0
0
Kumamoto's best-kept secrets 08.12.01 (5+ ¶¶)
Secret of Kumamoto Precious place
08.12.03
3
150
0
0
0
0
Learning with computers 2008.12.15 (6+ ¶¶)
Learning with computer
08.12.10
1
46
0
0
0
0
Totals
---
---
19
1910
8
0
0
0
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics M: number of other media included in post *: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
I think my best essay is Mrs. Doubtfire bonds and family, because I got five paragraphs and I was impressed this movie. I thought that family was boned tightly.
2.0. Comments
Showcase
Titles of posts with links
Dates of comments yy.mm.dd
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*
2.4. Most comments on:
Titles of posts with link
Dates of posts yy.mm.dd
Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
---
---
---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
---
---
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
---
---
---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?
---
---
---------- * Current semester comments on essays and other posts ** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.
... It is in a sidebar and footer widget, because it is easy to see the comments.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
.... maybe nothing
3.0. Book Reviews
3.1. Showcase
Short titles with links
Dates (yy.mm.dd)
Words
Comments
Example:
Vampire Killer
07.05.16
39
1
2-01
BONES
08.08.25
256
0
2-02
Hamster Chase
08.08.28
248
0
2-03
THERE BY THE SEA
08.08.29
104
0
2-04
AMANDA PIG ON HER OWN WIHOUT OLIVER
08.09.01
196
0
2-05
AMANDA PIG ON HER OWN SICK IN BED
08.09.05
96
0
2-06
THE BIG MESS
08.09.07
200
0
2-07
THE BAD SAD MAD DAY
08.09.08
289
0
2-08
The ENORMOUS TURNIP
08.09.10
300
0
2-09
The Castel That Jack Built
08.10.16
110
0
2-10
Goldilocks and the Three Bears
08.10.23
363
0
2-11
The Gingerbread Man
08.10.28
246
0
2-12
TOAD EATS OUT
08.11.08
155
0
2-13
My Tooth Is Loose!
08.11.10
230
0
2-14
THE UGRY DUCKLING
08.11.20
282
0
2-15
Little Witch Goes to School
08.12.01
421
0
2-16
The Giant Jelly Bean Jar
08.12.13
267
0
2-17
The Garden That We Grew
08.12.20
65
0
2-18
Farm Animals
09.01.24
55
0
---
---
Totals:
3883
0
Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
Showcase
Yes
No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?
○
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?
○
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?
○
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?
○
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?
○
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):
---
---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)
○
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")
○
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)
○
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)
○
"movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)
○
"brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")
○
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?
○
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?
___ other labels attached to three or more posts
---
---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below.
www (n)
xxx (m)
yyy (o)
zzz (p)
...
---
---
4.3. Links & media
---
---
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?
○
Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?
○
How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics?
___ posts including photos or other graphics
---
---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?
○
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?
___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)
---
---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?
○
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?
___ posts including other media
---
---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here:
...
...
...
---
---
What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yy.mm.dd) for reference.
... (short link, date)
... (short link, date)
... (short link, date)
---
---
4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.
...I made a brainstorming label, because it is useful to research what I write.
...
...
5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing on it
Please feel free to include reflections on both spring and fall semester work, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).
...
...
...
6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors
...To successors, you might write blog as soon as you can or after you have to write blog in haste.
...I should have done this blog as soon as I could.
...I should have put many links.
____________________ Notes:
This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c (Fall, 2008).
Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
____________________ License:
This portfolio template is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog" (without quotation marks).
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